Jordan Summer's BiaW: Day 3
| So far I've written everything from the heroine's POV. I don't know if that's a good thing or not. I've been struggling with both heroes POVs. I guess at one point I'll have to make them meet so they both find out they've been sleeping with the same woman and agree to have sex with her together (can you say threesome? *evil grin*) Since I want this story to be 5K (or barely over it), I wonder if it'll matter that most of the story is from her POV instead of their POV. Word count today: 1K Total word count: 3K |
posted by Silma at 5:02 PM
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Shawn said ... (7:06 PM) :
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Silma said ... (9:00 PM) :
post a commentI say leave it in her POV. The story is basically about her desire and her pleasure right?
I'd work if it weren't for the two guys. How do I explain her doing them both at the same time?
I say do what feels right. You can actually have them meet off screen and surprise her. Then before or after they can explain the situation. It might even work better because the reader won't know it's coming and it'll be a nice surprise. *wink*
Good luck!
I say you should write it in whatever way comes naturally. You can always go back and change it later if you want to.
But if the heroes' POVs are tough in coming, it'll show in the writing.
Thanks you all for your advice! *g* I'm going to do exactly that. There was only one or two scenes from each hero's POV, so I put those scenes on a separate file just in case they're needed. And for now I'm keeping it all in the heroine's POV. If after finishing the story and during editing I feel like the heroes' POV are needed, then I'll add them.