Elizabeth Lowell's workshop: Day 1
Elizabeth didn't waste time posting her first assignment. *grins* This one is an easy one, to give her the first conversation your hero and heroine have. Luckily, I had with me a copy of the dialogue between Michael and Claire. It's not a complete one, mind you. Of course, Elizabeth wants the dialogue to convey action/plot, character, emotion, and/or sexual tension in 15 lines, so I had to add a few more lines and directions. I think I went a bit overboard and did 17 lines. |
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