Sherryl's workshop: Final Day (Update)

I just came back from reading Sherryl's post on my final homework. According to her, I was suppossed to write how the incidents affected the conflict. Duh! Am I stupid or what? Tomorrow I'll revised the incidents. As for the pivotal moments, she liked #2 better, and I agree that it's one of those time-tested moments that we all know how it's going to turn out yet we hold our breath nevertheless awaiting the outcome. *chuckles* Oh, well, I don't mind not having the whole plot for this story. I'm more than happy with at least having a good idea of what the hero and heroine are. After all, the heroine's name was all I had since she was just briefly mentioned in a phone conversation between Katherine and Margaret. So having a good definition of who she is is more than I was hoping for when I started the workshop.