Sherryl's workshop: Day 2
| Sherryl loved my hero and heroine, and the conflict. *grins* Still, she asked me revised the conflict to show it more completely. So I reworked part of the heroine's description to show the conflict more, as Sherryl asked. Then I revised the conflict to tighten it up. I posted it all already. I hope she approaves of the changes I made. *crosses her fingers* Her assignment #2 is to come up with three secondary characters, and explain in a sentence or two how each one of them helps up the conflict. Hmmm... Now I've got to think this one carefully. I've already got one secondary character, Daniella Guzmán. One down, two to go. |
posted by Silma at 9:57 AM
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Silma said ... (4:41 PM) :
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Silma said ... (9:24 AM) :
post a commentThanks Teresa! *blushes* I admit I had some trouble with her assignments too. My mind was totally blank, and I didn't want to cheat by using the characters of "MM", which I used for the Kayla Perrin's workshop. It wasn't until I opened Katherine's file that I remembered about Sara, and things snowballed from there.
Yeah, but I'm having problems coming up with the 3rd. assignment, Teresa. =P