Sherryl's workshop: Day 2 (Update)

Sherryl read my revised conflict and loved it. *does a happy dance* I can't believe I did good. Now, as for the secondary characters, she agreed that Daniela Guzmán would make a strong secondary character, but she wasn't clear about Margaret Lynch's role as a secondary character and how she added to the conflict. I admit she was right. I'd tossed this character just for the sake of having 3 secondary characters, but I wasn't sure if I wanted this character appearing in this story (except for perhaps a bit in the first chapter). But as I read the questions Sherryl posted on her possible influence in the conflict/plot, an idea popped into my mind. (Darn, this new Muse of mine is working well! *winks*) So I reworked Margaret's description, which included a part in which she'd been one of André's romantic flings, and posted it in the forum. Sherryl just gave me the thumbs-up on Margaret. *vbg* Now the plot is taking shape.