Elizabeth Lowell's workshop: Day 1 (update 2)
Now Elizabeth wants me to add the first part of the dialogue in which Michael is talking on the microphone because I only posted 11 lines instead of 15. So I reposted the dialogue with the part added again. One of the things that annoys me is that Word counted 15 lines and she is telling me I've got 11. When I counted by hand, she was right. Stupid computer program. *grumbles* |
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Take heart. She asked you to repost, but gave you a huge Atta Girl! in the process. At least you weren't wordy. Like me. *g*
That's because she is waiting for me to re-post so she can chop my dialogue like she did yours. *lol*
No, it doesn't stink, Teresa. I read your post, and I like it. I wish I could write such a short dialogue with a big impact. But not me. I'm a babbler. =P